Wednesday, October 17, 2012

Thursday - October 18, 2012

Class Work
1. Let's look at the rough drafts of the Essay of Introduction.
  • Review the EMCC Writing Rubric - you may view a copy at any time by going to Blackboard and clicking on the Rubric button. A paper copy will be provided for your use today. Put your name on the top as the author.
  • Seat yourselves in groups of four.
  • You will pass your paper to the reader on the right. The first reader is the editing editor. Note mechanics' issues only. Yes, you may write on the paper!
  • The second reader is the Content editor. Check subject matter, focus, and support issues. Basically, do you need to know more? If so, ask questions.
  • The third reader is the Clarity editor. Check for organization. Ask yourself, "Does this make sense?" Also check for Language Usage. Ask yourself, "Do the sentences sound like standard English sentences?" Make notes and comments as needed.
  • By now, the paper should be back to the author! Revise as needed. Submit the final copy in MyCompLab as noted in the assignment there. Give me the paper copy of the draft and peer editing notes. This will be worth 25 points. (Due Tuesday!)
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Checking in to MyCompLab . . . make sure you see your name on my roster! If you do not, you are not registered for the proper class. Make the changes! - Stay signed in for the next few minutes as you will be
2. What is "yellow" in "The Yellow Wallpaper?" (Sharing) Why "yellow?"
3. What Gothic elements are in "The Yellow Wallpaper?"
4. What did you find out about the author? To what extent did you find the story to be autobiographical? (Discussion)
5. What is Postpartum Depression? Do a quick search for the symptoms and current treatment of Postpartum Depression. http://www.mayoclinic.com/health/postpartum-depression/DS00546/DSECTION=symptoms (Other sites have information as well.)
Also check MyCompLab. Click on Composing. Click to locate current research on this and other topics!)Watch and follow along . . .
Is it possible that the narrator is suffering from this disorder? What evidence exists?
6. What treatment and procedures is the narrator undergoing? How do these compare to the treatment that is recommended today?
7. Let's look at the room where the narrator resides. Describe it. Of what does it remind you? Where would you expect to find rooms like this?
8. Is it  possible that there really is a woman in the wallpaper? (Discuss)
9. What is the relationship between the narrator and John? What ultimately happens to John? Whose fault is that - John's, the narrator's, or the woman in the wallpaper?
10. How do film makers view this story? Let's look.
PBS - movie: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4FFkaaXzj8k&feature=related
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BAJm6gFJb4I
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q8Iy1fbw6sQ&feature=related
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sdk4cre_jT4&feature=related
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4YdQHSqpcI8&feature=related
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PVn2KJie8Xo&feature=related
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zPCYupOUcbo&feature=related
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lNdm4UyL5Wo&feature=related
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gWJ4ZtLlRvE&feature=related
Note: If we do not finish the movie in class, finish it for homework and complete #11 as explained.)
How does the movie differ from the short story? Was there a real lady in the wall?
11. If you were to make the movie today, what changes would you make? (Post your responses in MyCompLab - note 10 changes you would make. You make make additions or deletions. Explain why the changes would be needed for an audience in 2012.) Due: Tuesday (20 Pts.)

Homework
The homework assignments are listed in MyCompLab. Please complete each as explained. They are all due Tuesday.

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