Thursday, February 27, 2014

Thursday, February 27, 2014

Class Work - Walls continued
A. Watch out for walls! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gsyMiTx_CF8 (Thanks to Blake Wahlin!)

B. Take out your wall pictures. Share and discuss. Here are some sample questions.
  • Why did you select that wall?
  • Why was it built?
  • What uses did it serve?
  • How old is it?
  • How was it made? 
  • What materials were used?
  • How many people did it take to complete the wall?
  • What else do you know about the wall?
  • Was the wall a "success?" 
C. Now, take that "magic phone of yours and walk around the campus for 10 minutes. You may work in pairs or you may work individually. Take at least one picture of a wall or barrier that you found interesting in some way. If you don't have a camera on your phone, you may borrow a camera from me.

Post picture in CANVAS and explain why you selected that wall or barrier. See the questions above to help you think of what to say in a paragraph about your selected wall or barrier. Due - TODAY - February 27, 2014! 25 pts.


Partner Activity - "Mending Wall" by Robert Frost (handout)
Link: http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/15719


Do good fences make good neighbors? (Table discussion.)


Listen for the instructions.

Homework: Going back to the wall you selected for "B," if it is a wall or type of wall with history. Your assignment is to conduct research and discover the "history" of your wall. Check information from at least two sources. Also note if  the wall has changed over time. Explain.
 Was anything surprising? Post your history of the wall in CANVAS along with the sources searched.





Tuesday, February 25, 2014

Tuesday, February 25, 2014

Class Work

1. "All's well that ends well!" or so says Shakespeare. How well does your essay end?
  • Share at your table
  • Nominate someone to share with the class - not the same person who shared last time! Everybody needs to take a turn.
  • As a class, we will listen to the conclusions. What made the conclusions effective
 2. Print your essay so that you can look at it with a partner. During this activity, you will be looking for the in-text citations.
  •  Underline all in-text citations.
  • Look at the Works Cited page. Make sure there is an entry for each piece of borrowed information. Check as you go.
  • (A writer may borrow multiple pieces of information from a single source. Only one Works Cited entry needs to be included. However, an in-text citation must be included every time borrowed information is used in the text.)
  • Check to be sure that sources that are NOT referenced in the text do NOT appear on the Works Cited page. 
  • Check MLA formatting. (See last Thursday's blog for guidelines and sample essays.)
3. HOMEWORK: It is time to post the FINAL draft of your technology paper in MyCompLab. Revise and correct as needed. It is due Thursday.

A. Table Work: Create a mind-map using Walls/Barriers as the center element. Branch out from there. Yes, the colored pens are available! One map per table, please. All names must appear on the map. The person with the birthday closest to today is the "illustrator" of the map.

The person with the birthday farthest from today is the "leader/questioner" who keeps asking, "What else do we know about walls?"  and other questions.
Moving on . . . .

B. Take out your wall pictures. Share and discuss. Here are some sample questions.
  • Why did you select that wall?
  • Why was it built?
  • What uses did it serve?
  • How old is it?
  • How was it made? 
  • What materials were used?
  • How many people did it take to complete the wall?
  • What else do you know about the wall?
  • Was the wall a "success?" 
C. Now, take that "magic phone of yours and walk around the campus for 10 minutes. You may work in pairs or you may work individually. Take at least one picture of a wall or barrier that you found interesting in some way. If you don't have a camera on your phone, you may borrow a camera from me.

Post picture in CANVAS and explain why you selected that wall or barrier. See the questions above to help you think of what to say in a paragraph about your selected wall or barrier. Due - TODAY! 25 pts.


Partner Activity - "Mending Wall" by Robert Frost (handout)
Link: http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/15719


Homework:  Pick a wall, any wall, and find out how and why the wall or barrier was created. (Not all walls are barriers. Some are memorials.) Post a picture of the wall and your information in CANVAS. Give credit to your sources.) (25 pts.)

Thursday, February 20, 2014

Thursday - February 20, 2014

 Class Work
Now that you know what to do to create a great first impression, it is time to get on with the rough draft of the essay. Look back at the instructions. Follow the instructions.
WRITE THE DRAFT! Write all but the conclusion before Thursday.
Note where the in-text citations will go if you do not know how to do them. Otherwise, be sure to include the in-text citations.
Post in MyCompLab. (50 pts.) 

Please get your paper ready for a peer editor to read. You will receive a peer editing sheet. Listen for instructions.

We did not get to do this on Tuesday .

You probably noticed that you could include a quotation from a user of the technological wonder you selected as the focus of your essay. Take the next few minutes to interview at least three other students in our room. First, you need to devise three or four good questions to use as the focus of your interview.
Questions that require either a "yes" or "no" answer do not work well. What can you ask that will elicit extended responses?


Here are some tips: https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/559/06/

Take notes. Be sure you have the correct spelling of the names. Add the interview information to your EasyBib collection for this project. www.easybib.com





We pause now for a few words from your classmates on ways to include in-text citations without going crazy! WORD is your friend. 

 On to the conclusion...
http://writing2.richmond.edu/writing/wweb/conclude.html

or consider a call to action!
http://wiki.answers.com/Q/What_is_the_call_to_action_in_a_persuasive_essay#slide=1&article=What_is_the_call_to_action_in_a_persuasive_essay


  Here is a sample: http://writing.colostate.edu/guides/page.cfm?pageid=1144




 Homework: Write the conclusion and add it to the rest of your essay. Revise the body of the essay and add in-text citations. Post in MyCompLab by Tuesday. This is the next-to-the- last-draft. (50 pts) You will have one more opportunity to polish before the final draft is submitted. Work hard now and have little to revise!


Sample MLA style essay. Make your essay look like this!
http://bcs.bedfordstmartins.com/resdoc5e/RES5e_ch08_s1-0014.html
or
www.dianahacker.com/pdfs/hacker-Daly-MLA.pdf



Preview of coming attractions . . .Walls, walls, walls . . . start thinking about walls. Bring a picture of a famous or not-so-famous wall to class on Tuesday or be able to locate the picture when you arrive on Tuesday.





Tuesday, February 18, 2014

February 18, 2014 - Tuesday

Class Work

Just for fun . . . https://www.yahoo.com/tech/how-to-get-hacked-5-exciting-steps-77015513634.html

How secure is your life? How secure do you want it to be? Does it bother you that there are cameras watching you? Does it bother you that you can be tracked by the use of your phone or your credit cards? Are you safe when you are "visible?"


1.  Share your anecdote with the others at your table. As a group, select one reader to share with the entire class. Feel free to nominate extra readers!
Was there a point to your story?

2. By now, you should feel ready to write your essay.
Here are the instructions once again:

Technology – Friend or Foe?

For this essay, you are writing to convince the opposition of the merits or dangers of technology or controversial medical advances.  For this essay, you must pick a side. Think of this essay as a debate on paper. You must know what the opposition thinks, but you do not support that point of view.

I. Introduction –
a. Identify the specific technology you will be discussing – cell phone, computer, automobile, dishwasher, microwave, GPS, etc. Or you may discuss a specific medical advance such as stem cell research or cloning.  
b. Capture the attention of the audience in the normal way with startling statistics, an interesting anecdote, a quotation from an expert, lines from a song or poem, a thought provoking question, etc. In short, make sure that what you say makes the reader want to know more.
c. In addition, state your thesis – make your point of view clear!
II. The body of the paper will do several things –
a. Convince the readers that they either need or do not need the technology.
b. Provide a brief history of the specific technology you plan to discuss. What was life like before its invention? When was it invented? How has it evolved? What is its story?
c. Provide clear evidence to support your point of view. You must have proof from
1) At least two experts.
2) A current news source such as a newspaper or magazine
article or news cast.
3) An interview with at least one user if you select the technology option.
4) A personal anecdote if you select the technology option or have personal experience with the medical option.
5) Lines from literature – poem, short story, or novel. We read “The Veldt” and “There Will Come Soft Rains.”
6) Strong statistics from an expert source.
The body of the paper will be several paragraphs in length.
III. Conclusion –
Wrap it up for the readers. Leave them with a call to action to either give up or get the gadget you selected or to support or fight against the medical advance you selected. Be sure they know why they need or do not need one. Consider:
a. Convenience
b. Cost
c. Safety
d. Environmental impact
e. Ethical concerns
Here are some tips for writing strong first sentences:
Here are some sample first lines. Which ones do you like?

A. These are from college admission exams. Stanford published 22 opening lines of essays they liked, the writers of which were offered a place in the graduating class of 2012. Here are eight of those 22, chosen for their variety and uniqueness:

  1. On a hot Hollywood evening, I sat on a bike, sweltering in a winter coat and furry boots.
  2. While traveling through the daily path of life, have you ever stumbled upon a hidden pocket of the universe?
  3. Cancer tried to defeat me, and it failed.
  4. Flying over enemy territory, I took in Beirut’s beautiful skyline and wondered if under different circumstances I would have hopped on a bus and come here for my vacation. Instead, I saw the city from the window of a helicopter, in military uniform, my face camouflaged, on my way to a special operation deep behind enemy lines.
  5. I change my name each time I place an order at Starbucks.
  6. I was paralyzed from the waist down. I would try to move my leg or even shift an ankle but I never got a response. This was the first time thoughts of death ever crossed my mind.
  7. As an Indian-American, I am forever bound to the hyphen.
  8. Unlike many mathematicians, I live in an irrational world; I feel that my life is defined by a certain amount of irrationalities that bloom too frequently, such as my brief foray in front of 400 people without my pants.
B. There are suggestions for first lines to just about anything! http://writersrelief.com/blog/2009/06/how-to-write-a-good-first-line-for-books-novels-short-stories-essays-and-articles/

C. Just in case you want to think some more . . . http://www.alphastudent.com/start-an-essay-opening-sentence/
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We did not get to do this on Friday.

You probably noticed that you could include a quotation from a user of the technological wonder you selected as the focus of your essay. Take the next few minutes to interview at least three other students in our room. First, you need to devise three or four good questions to use as the focus of your interview.
Questions that require either a "yes" or "no" answer do not work well. What can you ask that will elicit extended responses?


Here are some tips: https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/559/06/

Take notes. Be sure you have the correct spelling of the names. Add the interview information to your EasyBib collection for this project. www.easybib.com



Now that you know what to do to create a great first impression, it is time to get on with the rough draft of the essay. Look back at the instructions. Follow the instructions.
WRITE THE DRAFT! Write all but the conclusion before Thursday.
Note where the in-text citations will go if you do not know how to do them. Otherwise, be sure to include the in-text citations.
Post in MyCompLab. (50 pts.)



Thursday, February 13, 2014

Thursday, February 13, 2014

Class Work

Activity #1:  Think back. What experiences have you personally had with the gadget of your choice? You will be writing a personal anecdote.
Step 1: Make sure the "story" supports your point of view on the use of technology. It must have a point.
Step 2: BRAINSTORM - Create a mind map.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/brainstorm_clustering.htm
Here are some samples: http://images.search.yahoo.com/search/images;_ylt=A0LEVxVwbvpSVwgAv19XNyoA;_ylu=X3oDMTB0dGM5cmsxBHNlYwNzYwRjb2xvA2JmMQR2dGlkA1ZJUDMxOV8x?_adv_prop=image&fr=ytff1-yff25&va=mind+map Yours does not need to be this colorful or exotic, but it does have to explore the possibilities associated with your story and your chosen topic. (In-class activity/colored pens are available for your use.)
Next: See the link above for steps 3, 4, and 5.
In addition: Here are some samples. Read several to get the feel. An anecdote is short, but it has a point. Your anecdote should do the same. http://canuwrite.com/anecdotes_main.php
 
Homework: Write the anecdote and post in CANVAS. It is due on Tuesday, February 18, 2014. (50 pts.) 


Activity #2:

Using numbers to support your point of view - Let's practice.

How much is a bottle of soda, coffee, or water here at EMCC?
How often do you purchase soda, coffee, or water each week?
How much do you spend each month?
How much do you spend each year?
What else in your life costs that much? Are you making a good investment?

If you started with the larger number and need a smaller number, show that one is only spending ______ amount per day. It might sound like a good deal!

Now let's look at charts and graphs.

https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/672/01/

UNC - Good informaiton: http://writingcenter.unc.edu/handouts/statistics/


Let's take a look at two charts. What do you see? (Scroll down)





Work with a partner and select a chart or graph from https://www.google.com/search?q=summarizing+charts+and+tables&client=firefox&hs=lQb&rls=com.yahoo:en-US:official&tbm=isch&tbo=u&source=univ&sa=X&ei=_6v8Upr6K-emygHss4GwCQ&ved=0CCYQsAQ&biw=1920&bih=916 . Write a paragraph summarizing the information presented.

Post the chart and the summary in CANVAS. Be sure that both names appear on the document.  You only need to post in one person's Canvas slot. I can record the grades for all group members.

When writing an essay, it is not enough to say, "See Chart #1." You need to provide guidance for the reader by writing a summary that points out the information that helps you prove your point.

Activity #3 - Homework


Now it is time for you to locate a chart or graph that relates to your technological item. Chart and graphs can often be found in articles.

Copy/paste the chart or graph into Canvas.

Write a paragraph that explains the information you want the readers to see and understand. This should be information that proves your point. Post the paragraph.

Also, post the Works Cited information in MLA format.

Suggestion: Continue to conduct research related to your topic. Keep track of your sources.

 
 
 

Tuesday, February 11, 2014

February 11, 2014 - Tuesday

Class Work/Homework is in GREEN!

A. We did not get to this on Thursday. It is a good place to start.
Let's talk in pairs- talk about each topic for one minute then move on to the next partner and topic. Listen for the signal to move! By the end of the speed discussions, you will have listened to and shared many new ideas!  
  1. Technology and health.
  2. Technology and safety.
  3. Technology and communication.
  4. Technology and war.
  5. Technology and exploration.
  6. Technology and driving.
  7. Technology and parenting.
  8. Technology and . . . (Let's continue the brainstorm!)
B. What happened when you went without your favorite gizmo or gadget for 12 + hours?
(Sharing)

C. Today we are going to look at art. How do artists view your chosen technological item?  Find a sculpture, painting, drawing, or photograph and answer the following:


. Looking at Art -

  • What is the title of the work? How does the title help you to understand the message? What is the message?
  • What is the most obvious image in the work. To where is your eye drawn?
  • Look at the colors. Are they symbolic? Would the message be different if the colors were different? Explain.
  • Study the shading and shadowing. How do these elements impact the overall message?
  • Who is the artist? When was the work created? Is the artist's message about a specific event in history? What was going on in the world when the work was created? Is the art universal - speaks to people of all times and in all places, or is it limited to the audience for whom it was created.
  • How does the work relate to us in 21st century America?
Here is an example. Suppose I had selected clocks or watches as the focus of my study.
He is perhaps best known for his 1931 painting The Persistence of Memory, showing melting clocks in a landscape setting.
You have the next 10 minutes to get started. Find the picture. That is the first task.
Post your picture and answers to the questions in CANVAS. We will share in class on Thursday. (20 for posting = 10 for sharing on Thursday.)
 We will start here on Thursday. The anecdote will be due next Tuesday . . . not Thursday.
D. Now, think back. What experiences have you personally had with the gadget of your choice? You will be writing a personal anecdote.
Step 1: Make sure the "story" supports your point of view on the use of technology. It must have a point.
Step 2: BRAINSTORM - Create a mind map. Here are some samples: http://images.search.yahoo.com/search/images;_ylt=A0LEVxVwbvpSVwgAv19XNyoA;_ylu=X3oDMTB0dGM5cmsxBHNlYwNzYwRjb2xvA2JmMQR2dGlkA1ZJUDMxOV8x?_adv_prop=image&fr=ytff1-yff25&va=mind+map Yours does not need to be this colorful or exotic, but it does have to explore the possibilities associated with your story and your chosen topic. (In-class activity/colored pens are available for your use.)
See the link for steps 3, 4, and 5.
Write the anecdote and post in CANVAS. It is due on Tuesday, February 18, 2014. (50 pts.) 
Here are some samples. Read several to get the feel. An anecdote is short, but it has a point. Your anecdote should do the same.
                                                              

Thursday, February 6, 2014

February 7, 2014

Class Work

1. Quick discussion of the interviews you conducted:
  • What technological advances did the interviewee note?
  • Was the interviewee a fan or a foe of new technology? What were some of the reasons for the stance?
  • What technology did the interviewee use either with enthusiasm or reluctantly?
  • What other interesting "facts" came up in the interview?
FYI:
Here are some quotations about technology.http://www.quotegarden.com/technology.html

3. Moving more toward the dangers of technology, we will be watching a version of "The Veldt" by Ray Bradbury.
 We will stop periodically to discuss and take notes on the technology presented and the issues associated with that technology. Again, I ask, "How real is too real?"

Movie version of "The Veldt": http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uhOf-CN7xRc

If you want to listen to the author read the story, here is the link: http://video.search.yahoo.com/video/play?p=the+veldt&vid=5c461ad5f3da306aa292f8850c5c8730&l=29%3A24&turl=http%3A%2F%2Fts1.mm.bing.net%2Fth%3Fid%3DV.4795521194987392%26pid%3D15.1&rurl=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.youtube.com%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DeJYwGm2nIVU&tit=BRADBURY+13+%26quot%3BThe+Veldt%26quot%3B+narrated+by+Paul+Frees&c=4&sigr=11anf7iq6&sigt=11oq5k22q&ct=p&pstcat=animals&age=0&&tt=b
 
Here is Stephen Colbert reading - it you prefer:
 

  • What are the issues presented in the story/video?
  • Is technology the problem, or is the problem something else?
  • In what ways might humanity change because of technology? Are we less "human" than our cave-dwelling ancestors?

 Let's talk in pairs- talk about each topic for one minute then move on to the next topic. By the end of the speed discussions, you will have listened to and shared many new ideas!

Technology and health.
Technology and safety.
Technology and communication.
Technology and war.
Technology and exploration.
Technology and driving.
Technology and parenting.
Technology and . . . (Let's continue the brainstorm!)

Homework

1. Select one gizmo or gadget that you will do without for 24 hours. Keep of journal of your thoughts/feelings/actions during that time. Note how your life changed, if it did. Note if you experienced withdrawal symptoms like the children in "The Veldt." Would you want to go without the item for longer? What are the advantages and disadvantages? Post a summary of your experience on CANVAS. (35 pts.)

2. Take a look at the directions for the Technology Friend or Foe writing assignment. The history section is due by Tuesday. We will work through this step by step.
Select one technological gizmo or gadget to serve as the focus of your next essay. Conduct research on the item. Find out the history of it. Either tell the history in paragraph form or create a bulleted time line. Be sure to post your source(s). 25 pts. Post in CANVAS.

Directions for the paper:


Technology – Friend or Foe?

For this essay, you are writing to convince the opposition. Consider the dangers and advantages of technology. For this essay, you must pick a side. Think of this essay as a debate on paper. You must know what the opposition thinks, but you do not support that point of view.

I.                    Introduction –

a.       Identify the specific technology you will be discussing – cell phone, computer, automobile, dishwasher, microwave, GPS, video games, etc.

b.      Capture the attention of the audience in the normal way with startling statistics, an interesting anecdote, a quotation from an expert, lines from a song or poem, a thought provoking question, etc. In short, make sure that what you say makes the reader want to know more.

c.       In addition, state your thesis – make your point of view clear! (Some of you may be taking a creative approach. See me if this is the case.)

II.                  The body of the paper will do several things –

a.       Convince the reader that their either need or do not need the technology.

b.      Provide a brief history of the specific technology you plan to discuss. What was life like before its invention? When was it invented? How has it evolved? What is its story?

c.       Provide clear evidence to support your point of view. You must have proof from

                                                               i.      At least three experts/sources.

                                                             ii.      A current news source such as a newspaper or magazine article or news cast.

                                                            iii.      An interview with at least one user.

                                                           iv.      A personal anecdote.

                                                             v.      Lines from literature – poem, short story, or novel. Feel free to use Jekyll and Hyde, “A Sound of Thunder,”  “There Will Come Soft Rains,” or other SciFi literature. (These are suggestions only.)

                                                           vi.      Strong statistics from an expert source.

The body of the paper will be several paragraphs in length.

III.                Conclusion –

Wrap it up for the readers. Leave them with a call to action to either give up or get the gadget you are supporting. Be sure they know why they need or do not need one. Consider:

a.       Convenience

b.      Cost

c.       Safety

d.      Environmental impact

e.      Impact on society










 
  

Tuesday, February 4, 2014

Tuesday February 4, 2014

Class Work

Homework review . . .
For homework, you were to read "I Can't Think" by Sharon Begley.  http://www.sharonlbegley.com/the-science-of-making-decisions

Define the terms on the sheet. (Handout) On Tuesday, we will discuss the terms.
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 Be honest - did you read the story? For homework you should have read "There Will Come Soft Rains" by Ray Bradbury. This is a story from the 1950s. At that time, this was a vision of the future. Note all of the technology that we actually have today. Now, envision life 50 years from today. What will the "modern" home look like? Will it be good for us or will it be a little too helpful? Post your ideas in CANVAS. Explain the virtues or vices of such a home. (Let's discuss what you envisioned!) Call up your prediction on Canvas and share at your table. Nominate one person from your table to read to the class.

Story review: Here is a link to the story just in case you can't find your paper copy!
http://www.cosmosmagazine.com/science-fiction/august-2026-there-will-come-soft-rains/

If you need some ideas, try these sites. See what you think. Your guess is as good as anybody's!
http://itechfuture.com/
http://www.bbc.com/future/sections/technology
http://images.search.yahoo.com/search/images;_ylt=A0SO81TTpepSCXMAZ2JXNyoA;_ylu=X3oDMTB0aG01cW5wBHNlYwNzYwRjb2xvA2dxMQR2dGlkA1ZJUDMxOV8x?_adv_prop=image&fr=ytff1-yff25&va=technology+expo+2014

Technology - Friend or Foe????
 What technology was mentioned in the news this week. Search on-line news sources or just read the stories at Yahoo or Google. Talk about it. For example, while listening to the News 10 early news, I heard that we may be going blind due to the blue light coming from our computer screens, tablets, and cell phones. Soon, we may all be wearing glasses that block the blue rays. I would say that this is a danger of technology!

You have 7 minutes to search. Prepare a list for the table. The person with the longest name is the recorder.

Think about it - How "real" is "too real" when it comes to television, movies, or video games? In class, we will do a readers' theatre version of "The Veldt" by Ray Bradbury. (Written around 1951.)

sections/technology  http://images.search.yahoo.com/search/images;_ylt=A0SO81TTpepSCXMAZ2JXNyoA;_ylu=X3oDMTB0aG01cW5wBHNlYwNzYwRjb2xvA2dxMQR2dGlkA1ZJUDMxOV8x?_adv_prop=image&fr=ytff1-yff25&va=technology+expo+2014

If you want to listen to the author read the story, here is the link: http://video.search.yahoo.com/video/play?p=the+veldt&vid=5c461ad5f3da306aa292f8850c5c8730&l=29%3A24&turl=http%3A%2F%2Fts1.mm.bing.net%2Fth%3Fid%3DV.4795521194987392%26pid%3D15.1&rurl=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.youtube.com%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DeJYwGm2nIVU&tit=BRADBURY+13+%26quot%3BThe+Veldt%26quot%3B+narrated+by+Paul+Frees&c=4&sigr=11anf7iq6&sigt=11oq5k22q&ct=p&pstcat=animals&age=0&&tt=b

Here is Stephen Colbert reading - it you prefer:
 Part 1:  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KSoigRHHNLM
Part 2: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Px7ihSd9bXM&feature=relmfu

Part 3: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yYQuOX-NQIY&feature=relmfu


For homework, interview someone who is 40 years old or older. Ask them to tell you about the technology they see today and compare it to the technology they used or had access to as a child. Ask them about the dangers and advantages of technology. Take notes. Post the interview on CANVAS. This should be in paragraph format and should be two or three paragraphs in length.