Thursday, August 30, 2018

August 30, 2018 - Thursday

Class Work

1. Look back at the instances of "yellow" or yellow-like things in the story. Compare at your table. In what way did the color change in the story? Why was the perception different? (Share at your table, then share with the class.)

2. What did you learn about the life and times of Charlotte Perkins Gillman? Compare/Contrast her life experiences to the main character in the short story. (Partner activity)

3. What would you expect to find in a haunted house?  Think/pair/share/draw ONE item on the board! 

Now, take a look at this site. http://www.virtualsalt.com/gothic.htm
Look back at "The Yellow Wallpaper" and make a list of all of the gothic items. This leads to the question, Is the narrator in the insane, or is the house haunted? Perhaps the story contains a bit of both.

4.  Roles of men and women in the late 1800s and early 1900s:  
If you were to make a list of the top 10 items people find attractive in a significant other, what would be on the list?

5. Common medical practice for curing  depression after child birth and depression itself in the early 1900s . . . Note that John was simply giving his wife the best medicine there was at the time - or was he? 

Homework: Reread the story and note what John says and what the narrator says to him and about him. 
Bring the list to class on Tuesday. In addition, note all items/people/events in the story that could be classified as Gothic or things one might expect to find in a haunted house. (30 points)





Homework

 View the PBS movie of the short story of "The Yellow Wallpaper.".(We will begin in class.)
Be the critic. 
  • Rate each segment.
  • What do you like about it?
  • What is weak?
  • If you were the director, what would you change?
Finish viewing for homework.  Post your ratings, reactions, and changes in Canvas. Be sure to label the segments. 
Movie in 8 parts: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL54A86EACAA247777 (Click each segment to move along.) (40 points)

Tuesday, August 28, 2018

August 28, 2018 - Tuesday

Class Work

1. Submit the peer editing notes and the reflection post it.
2. Let's go back to "The Story of an Hour." What did you say happened next?

A. Mallard (Look up information about mallard ducks. Think about how the life of mallard ducks is like the life of Mr. & Mrs. Mallard.
B. Josephine
C. Richards
D. Brently Mallard
E. Louise Mallard

Group activity: 5 groups (See above) Talk to your group and share what you found out about the meaning of the name assigned and discuss how that name relates to the events of the story.

3. The color yellow - As a group, make a list of things that are yellow! You have two minutes to list as many items as you can.  (Class discussion to follow.)

4. What do you know about the color? Does yellow have any special powers? Is it linked to any symbols? What is the dictionary definition? Is yellow a popular color? What animals are yellow? What flowers are yellow? What gems are yellow? Etc.   (5 minute research .... Go!) What was the most interesting piece of information. Write that on the post-it. Post on the board.

Quick write:  What memory or memories do you have of the color yellow? Talk at your table to get ready to write.  If you have no experiences that lead to writing, explain why you would or why you would not paint a room yellow. (10 minutes to write -) Sharing to follow. 

5. 
A. Look at the art of the time. What are women doing? What are men doing? 
http://www.nga.gov/content/ngaweb/features/slideshows/american-impressionists-of-the-late-1800s-and-early-1900s.html#slide_1
B. . A slice of life: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ugh7pRtzTAQ Again, what are the women doing? What about the men?

Homework:  

Assignment #1: Short Story - "The Yellow Wallpaper"  
 http://www.gradesaver.com/the-yellow-wallpaper/e-text/section1/ By Thursday, read the story and make a list of all things that are yellow in the story. (If you decide to print a copy, you just need to highlight the yellow things.) Bring your list or highlighted story to class on Thursday.  

If you like to listen, here is an audio link: 

Assignment #2: A. Look up information about Charlotte Perkins Gilman, the author of "The Yellow Wallpaper." Make a list of 10 items or events  you found interesting about her life. For each, explain how it was or was not typical of the time, or explain what it might have had to do with Ms. Gilman writing "The Yellow Wallpaper." Consult three different sources. Keep track of your sources. For now, include the URL. (Do not count Wikipedia) Post in CANVAS. 

Thursday, August 23, 2018

August 23, 2018

Class Work

Writing thought: We’re past the age of heroes and hero kings. … Most of our lives are basically mundane and dull, and it’s up to the writer to find ways to make them interesting.”
—John Updike, WD
1. Questions? Concerns?
2. Peer editing activity - Big question: Was the writing interesting?

Rubric

EMCC Writing Rubric                      Scale:
4:  The reader is easily able to understand and/or appreciate
3:  The reader is generally able to understand and/or appreciate
2:  The reader is often challenged to understand and/or appreciate
1:  The reader is seriously challenged to understand and/or appreciate           


Scale
Points
Comments

Content



Subject Matter Issues:
The subject matter of the document should be appropriate for the assignment, adequate to complete the assignment, and suitable for the level of the assignment.
4
3
2
1
N.A.


Focus Issues:
The focus (or main idea or thesis) should be apparent to the reader, presented so as to interest the reader, and targeted to achieve the purpose of the assignment.

4
3
2
1
N.A


Support Issues:
The support should be appropriate to sustain the document’s focus, carefully chosen to meet the needs of the assignment, and of sufficient quantity to carry out the development of the document.
4
3
2
1
N.A



Clarity



Organization Issues:
The document should be developed in a way that shows how all material relates to the focus, shows how all development relates to other parts of the document, and provides adequate transitions to guide the reader and illustrate these relationships.
4
3
2
1
N.A


Language Use Issues:
The language of the document should aid the reader’s comprehension and appreciation by using organized paragraphing, clear and correct sentences, and appropriate word choice.
4
3
2
1
N.A



Editing



Format Issues:
The format of the document should aid comprehension by being clear, consistent, and appropriate for the assignment.
4
3
2
1
N.A


Citation Issues:
The citation in the document should be complete, correct, and appropriate for the assignment.
4
3
2
1
N.A


Mechanics Issues:
The document should be comprehensively edited to ensure that the spelling is correct, that punctuation is properly used, and that grammar is correct.
4
3
2
1
N.A



Directions: 
A. Pull up your draft in CANVAS so that it appears on the screen. If you did a copy/paste from a Word document, the editor will be able to make marks on your draft. If not, the editor will have to settle for comments on the side and on the rubric paper.

B. As Editor #1 - sign you name by the word "Content." You will be reading the draft and commenting on the subject, focus, and support. (See the rubric for details.) Comment on the paper rubric. Feel free to make comments on the Canvas draft to show what you mean.

C. Swap seats with someone who is not at your table. You are now Editor #2 and will be commenting on "Clarity."Sign, please.Refer to the rubric for details. Comment on Canvas and on the paper rubric. Be sure to note if a sentence is confusing or if a word choice could be stronger.

D.  Return to your own desk/paper. Take a look at the comments. on the sticky-note, make a list for yourself of the things you will do do revise and polish this essay. Stick it on the rubric and use both as you revise this weekend.

Homework: Your final copy is due on Tuesday at noon. Be sure to copy/paste from a Word document so that I can make comments and note areas of strength and areas in need of attention. 

Activity #2 "Story of an Hour"

What do you know about life at the turn of the 19th-20th Century? 

Fashion/dress:


Houses


Read the story. Create a mind-map for Mrs. Mallard. What was she thinking? Why? What are the main images? 

Homework: Look up the meanings of the names in the short story. 
A. Mallard (Look up information about mallard ducks. Think about how the life of mallard ducks is like the life of Mr. & Mrs. Mallard.
B. Josephine
C. Richards
D. Brently Mallard
E. Louise Mallard

Write what you find. Make a few notes about how the name meanings relate to the events of the story.

Also, In three or four sentences, explain what you think might happen next? Is there more to the story? (This is fiction writing. Have fun. )

Monday, August 20, 2018

Welcome to English 102 - August 21, 2018

Congratulations! You located the blog. This is a record of what we do in class each day. It also contains links to required readings.Look here if you need to refresh your memory as to what we did in class or to see a quick overview of assignments.

Contact me via Canvas Message if you have questions or need help.

Class Work
1. Getting to Know You Activity
2. Personal Writing : Definition of the Personal Essay. A personal essay is either a personal narrative in which the author writes about a personal incident or experience that provided significant personal meaning or a lesson learned, or it is a personal opinion about some topic or issue that is important to the writer.

Memoir: Definition. Memoirs are factual stories about someone's life. 'Memoir' is from the French word mémoire, which means 'reminiscence' or 'memory.' They are a part of the nonfiction literary genre and are usually told in the first person.








3. Discussion: "My Writing Lite" ( Groups of 5 - discuss your life as a writer. Who are you now as a writer? What was your best or worst writing experience. Do you write on paper or with your fingers on the keys of a computer? Perhaps you dictate into your text messages. Has writing ever helped you? Did anyone ever write to you and that letter impacted your life for good or for ill? In short, talk about writing. Also, see the list of 30 below and decide which describes you as a writer. 

4. Now look back at the items on the balls for activity #1. Compare your writing life to one of the spaces. Tell of a a writing event from your life that is like one of the 30. 

For example, if you are a great writer, you might consider writing as a cool gift. Describe the time you received a cool gift and explain how your writing is like that cool gift.

Maybe your writing is like a roller coaster at an amusement park. It has its ups and downs. Explain your life a a writer in terms of the ups and downs. 

(Discussion)

1. Awesome Amusement Ride
2. TV show i'd never watch
3. Colors you like
4. In the winter I ______________.
5. Funniest cartoon
6. Place you were born
7. Something you can draw
8. Great vacation place
9. Best snacks
10 Cool gift
11. Favorite toy or game
12. Great or not so great birthday party
13. Three wishes
14. Cool musician or song
15. Family
16. 3 yummy foods
17. An author you read
18. Favorite breakfast
19. Nickname
20. 3 gross foods
21. Happy memory
22. Age
23. Fun sport
24. Color you like
25. A magical power
26. Easy or difficult project
27. In the summer I ____________________. 
28. Best pet to own
29. Animal you like or don't like to touch
30. your choice. 

Homework
Assignment: Using the definitions of a personal essay and of a memoir as a guide, write about an event that had an impact on you and your writing. This should be 1-2 pages in length. You will be comparing a writing event to one of the 30 above. Tell the story. Write in first person. Add characters, if any. Describe. 

Post the draft in CANVAS. We will be using the draft for a peer editing activity on Thursday. The draft must be posted by the beginning of class on Thursday, August 23, 2018. (40 points))

Assignment B: Syllabus Review: Read the syllabus. The link appearsto the left of the page on Canvas. The syllabus also appears at the bottom of this page. 
A. Write three sentences noting items of interest from the syllabus.
B. Write three sentences noting questions or concerns you have about the syllabus or the course. 

Post  CANVAS. 30 Points
Due by Midnight on August 22, 2018 - Wednesday - 

Syllabus
ESTRELLA MOUNTAIN COMMUNITY COLLEGE – Spring 2018 – Buckeye Campus
EMCC Buckeye Edu Cntr Rm 123: Section 102-0038: 11022
Aug 21, 2018-
Dec 14, 2018


First – Year Composition – 3 Credit Hours – English 102 T/TH  12:00-1:15
        Instructor: Mrs. Patricia Eaton
E-mail: patricia.eaton@estrllamountain.edu (Please use the message feature on Canvas instead. I check that several times a day. I only check the e-mail daily.
Blog: www.102eatonenglish.blogspot.com (I post each day’s activities and assignments here.
Required Texts: None – You are required to check the blog for links to readings, class work, and homework.
Note: The syllabus is subject to change. Daily updates will be provided.
Important: If you miss a class, be sure to contact me via CANVAS message after reading the blog. Feel free to ask questions and ask for help.
Required Course Materials, Supplies, and Technologies
  1. A computer with Internet access. The college has many of these available in the Media Center on the main campus if you are having trouble with this.
  2. Microsoft Word – I will check, but in years past, this has been free to students. Check with the technology center for details.
  3. All assignments MUST be submitted on Canvas unless otherwise noted in writing on Canvas.
Course Description
(Prerequisite: English 101 with a grade of “C” or better.)

English 102 builds upon skills developed in English 101. This course will require students to analyze and respond to text-based writing. Students will examine essays, short stories, and poetry. Students will be responsible for writing a minimum of three short critical essays to develop skills in textual analysis, written expression, and proper documentation. One of these writing assignments will be counted as an essay exam. These essays should be approximately three to five pages in length, typed, double spaced throughout, and have one-inch margins on all sides. Place your name, the date, and the course title in the upper left hand corner of the first page. Follow MLA formatting and guidelines for documentation.

In addition, students will be introduced to research strategies, note-taking, organization, and documentation in order to write well-developed and properly documented research papers. In completing research papers, students will demonstrate the ability to read difficult material with comprehension; to process information through quotation, summary, and paraphrase, and to integrate the ideas of others into their own sustained written examination of a subject.

The length of the research paper should be between 1,500-2,500 words.
In addition, numerous shorter writings will be completed.
Course Competencies
1. Develop skills in selecting, researching, analyzing, synthesizing, and documenting a 1,500-2,500 word research paper.
2. Compile a preliminary bibliography of potential research resources.
3. Use a variety of print and on-line library resources, including electronic databases, to locate information on the selected topic.
4. Use effective strategies for taking and organizing notes.
5. Analyze, interpret, and evaluate information found in research sources.
6. Paraphrase in language that is distinctly the student’s and quote source information accurately in order to avoid plagiarism.
7. Summarize a passage to reflect the central idea, most significant supporting details, or, and emphasis of the original work.
8. Compose an outline with an effective pattern of organization for the paper.
9. Compose a focused and clearly stated thesis for the paper.
10. Integrate cited information in summary, paraphrase, and quotations to support the thesis
11. Document information from research sources using MLA or APA documentation formatting.
12. Revise the draft of the paper, incorporating feedback received during editing, to produce a finished research paper that observes Standard English usage and manuscript form.
13. Explain and practice the principles of academic integrity throughout the research, writing, and revision process.
14. Write a minimum of three additional papers which involve critical reading and writing.
15. Write at least one argumentation paper which demonstrates sound, logical development.
16. Expose students to various forms of literary expression.

Abilities: Critical thinking and effective communication have been identified as essential to student success and will be integrated into this course. Critical thinking is defined as the ability to identify a problem, develop and implement strategies, evaluate information, reach conclusion, and respond to a problem. Effective communication is defined as the ability to respond to an audience, demonstrate clear sense of purpose, organize information, and deliver information using appropriate language.
Submission of Assignments: You must submit your assignments on CANVAS. Paper copies, unless specifically requested, will NOT be accepted or graded.

Attendance Policy: Active participation is expected for successful completion in this course. In the event of an absence, students are expected to contact me by e-mail (patriciaeatonaz@yahoo.com) or to visit the class blog at www.eatonenglish102.blogspot.com
Students are expected to complete any homework for the missed day by the next class period. If a student misses more than three classes, Maricopa Community College District policy states, “An instructor has the option of withdrawing a student who has accumulated unofficial absences in excess of the times a class meets per week (Withdrawal Policy #3).” See the college catalog for a full description of the college’s attendance policy including official absences and religious holidays.
Official Absences
a.       Official absences are those that occur when students are involved in an official activity of the college, i.e., field trips, tournaments, athletic events, and present an official absence excuse form. Absences for such events shall not count against the number of absences allowed by an instructor or department. Students who must miss a class for an official reason must obtain an official absence verification card from the appropriate vice president or designee and present it to the appropriate instructor(s) before the absence. Prior arrangements must be made with each instructor for make-up work. If prior arrangements have been made, the student will not be penalized.
b.      Other official absences include jury duty and subpoenas. Appropriate documentation will be required. Prior arrangements must be made with each instructor for makeup work. If prior arrangements have been made, the student will not be penalized.
c.       In the event of military commitments. Absences for periods of up to one week will not be counted against the number of absences allowed by an instructor or department. The student is required to provide appropriate documentation of the specific orders, length of assignment and location. Prior notification must be initiated with each instructor to discuss make-up work. If the length of the absence will be longer than one week, the instructor and the student will determine whether there is sufficient opportunity for the student to make up the work. If it is determined that the length of absence for the military commitment provides an undue hardship on the student’s ability to make up the assignments, he or she will be provided an opportunity to request an incomplete grade or drop the class or, in the case of open-entry classes, the opportunity to request an extension.
d.      In the event of the death of an immediate family member, absences for periods of up to one week will not be counted against the number of absences allowed by an instructor or department. Students should contact instructor(s) as soon as possible to arrange for make-up work. Appropriate documentation will be required (for example, a copy of the obituary or funeral program). In specialized programs that require clinical rotations, this regulation may not apply.
Religious Holidays
Students shall have the right to observe major religious holidays without penalty or reprisal by any administrator, faculty member or employee of the Maricopa Community Colleges. Absences for such holidays shall not count against the number of absences allowed by an instructor or department. At least one week before the holiday, students shall submit to their instructor(s) a written statement that includes both the date of the holiday and the reason why class attendance is impossible. Prior arrangements must be made with each instructor for make-up work. If prior arrangements have been made, the student will not be penalized.
Late Work: Make-ups of in-class writing assignments are at the instructor’s discretion. Students turning their work in after the due date may be penalized by having the grade lowered five points per day in fairness to those students who met the deadline.

Tape Recordings and/or Video Recordings: In order to tape or transmit any class session or portion, a student must first seek permission from the instructor. In some instances, permission from the members of the class will also be required every time you plan to record. This includes FaceTime or other uses of technology that involve transmitting the class activities.

Cell Phones: Cell phones must be turned off or placed on “vibrate” during class. At no time should a student be sending text messages, sending e-mails, listening to music, or carrying on conversations. In the event of an emergency call, please excuse yourself from the room, take care of the situation, and quietly return to class.
Student Disabilities: If you have a disability that requires special accommodations, please let me know as soon as possible. You are entitled to the accommodations. “Students with disabilities are encouraged to contact the DRS office at the beginning of the admissions process to discuss accommodation needs and to request an alternate format of printed materials. Some accommodation may require three to four weeks notification. For more information, call 623-935-8928.
I private message will be sent to me. See me if you ever need additional help.

Information for Pregnant or Parenting Students: If you are a pregnant or parenting student, you are protected under Title IX regarding classroom accommodations. Please request information by contacting the Disability Resource Center (KOM B-125) or phone 623-935-8863 or 623-935-8928 or e-mail: drc@estrellamountain.edu .

Grading Scale: Short essays are 100 points each. There will be several short essays and three fully developed essays. Longer essays count double. In order to earn full credit, drafts and revisions must be submitted with the final copy. Peer editing sheets are also required for formal essays.

Research notes, drafts, revision, MLA works cited page, and MLA in-text citations are required.

Class participation is 100 points.
A= 90-100%
B=80-89%
C=70-79%
D=60-69%
F=0-59%
Additional assignments include in-class writings and group activities.
One formal group presentation is required and counts the same as a formal essay.
Assignments that are not submitted count as zero.
Course assignments include but are not limited to the following topics:
  • Personal Essay/Memoir
  • Relationships: Definition Essay
  • Privacy Issues: Argumentative Essay
  • War and Walls: Pamphlet/PowerPoint/Persuasive Research
  • Between Worlds: Comparison/Contrast
  • (Note – topics are subject to change based on the needs and interests of the class.)
  • Participation in class activities (Come to class. Participate!)


Plagiarism and Academic Integrity: Plagiarism is the process of borrowing information from other sources or individuals without giving credit. Plagiarism will not be tolerated. Essays will not be accepted unless accompanied by pre-writing, notes, drafts, peer and self” editing marks, etc. This paper trail is proof of a student’s own work. Proof of plagiarism will result in a zero for the assignment.
All students assume as part of their obligation to the college the responsibility to exhibit in their academic performance the qualities of honesty and integrity. All forms of student dishonesty are subject to disciplinary action. Students are responsible for familiarizing themselves with EMCC’s Students Right and Responsibilities.

Classroom Misconduct: Students must read the “Code of Student Conduct” in the new Student Handbook for an understanding of what will be expected within the academic setting.

Additional Information
Writing assistance is available at the EMCC Academic Success Center on the EMCC main campus.
Writing 623-935-8189 
Drop-in Hours: Mon-Thur – 7:30 am-7:00 pm & Friday 7:30 am-4:30 pm
EMCC Peer Mentoring: Walk-in peer mentoring is available for students. Peer mentors can help you with campus resources, coping strategies, academic success, and the development of strong life skills. Phone 623-935-8380 or visit Komatke Hall B 128. Also see http://estrellamountain.edu/students/peer-mentoring .
Also see the FREE Academic Success Center/Tutoring services located in Estrella Hall South, first floor, to reinforce and supplement classroom instruction. On-line services are also available at
http://www.estrellamountain.edu/students/tutoring
Sexual Harassment: This is unwelcome. Verbal or physical conduct of a sexual nature that is sufficiently severe, persistent, or pervasive and alters learning conditions and creates a hostile environment or reasonably interferes with, limits, or deprives a student of the ability to participate in or benefit from any educational program or activity is prohibited.
See: My. Maricopa.edu to view the Preventing Sexual Harassment and Sexual Violence course that is available to students. Self-enroll on your Message Center.
Report discrimination and/or harassment that you experience and/or observe to the Vice President of Students Affairs/Title IX Coordinator: Dr. Patricia Cardenas-Adame. The office is located in Estrella Hall – Room 221. 623-935-8812.
EMCC Student Food Pantry: Free food is available for current EMCC students. This service is located in the Student Union, Monday-Thursday from 8:00 am-6:30 PM and on Friday from 8:00 am-4:30 pm. This service is closed on weekends. Donations are always welcome!
Visit http://estrellamountain.edu/students/student- for additional information.
Additional Resources:
  • Computer Commons
  • Library
  • Veterans Services
  • Lactation Room
  • Student Academic Achievement Committee
  • Counseling

Final Thoughts: This course is designed to help you become a better writer, researcher, and reader. You will get out of the course what you put into it. You are expected to actively participate in readings, discussions, debates, and reports. Come to class prepared with readings and with required writings and notes. Conduct thorough research. At all times, give credit to the source of information by using proper documentation. Be on time. Be positive. Ask questions. Contribute your thoughts. Be tolerant of others and of ideas that differ from your own.