Tuesday, March 21, 2017

March 21, 2017 - Tuesday

Class Work

Goal: To gather information leading to the next major writing activity. 

1. Review the guidelines for writing a movie review - what should be included? List on the board!

 Trade written reviews and complete the War Movie Peer Review sheet.

Homework:

Review and revise your review. Submit the revision and the peer editing sheet on paper on Thursday. 

2. Share at your table. Each table will nominate one critic to share with the class. Enthusiasm counts!

3. Begin viewing  In the Time of the Butterflies. This movie is based on true events. Watch. Answer the questions. To begin, take 10 minutes and write about the things that are important to you. What do you hold dear? Is there anything for which you would fight to save or keep or change? (10 minute quick-write in CANVAS.)

Homework: 
 Take a look around YouTube and the Internet and create a list at least 10  war songs.
Study the lyrics. Pick one to study and share.


  • Select one song to share. Post the lyrics. (10 points)
  • Be ready to play or share the song.
  • Identify the war/time period/location of when the song was popular. (Post) 30 points)
  • Share the message. (Post and be prepared to share in class on Thursday.) (10 points)

Thursday, March 9, 2017

March 9. 2017 - Thursday

Reminder: Spring Break is next week - NO CLASS!

Class Work

1. Take a look around YouTube and the WWWeb. Locate famous war movies. At your table, make a list of at least 10 you have seen. ( Discussion to follow regarding time period, war, popularity, awards won, message,  etc. )

2. Look at sample movie reviews; https://academichelp.net/samples/academics/reviews/movie/

3. Learn how to write a movie review: https://academichelp.net/samples/academics/reviews/movie/


3. Now, take a look around YouTube and the WWWeb, and create a list of war songs. (table activity)
Study the lyrics. When was the song or tune popular? What was the message?

Homework:  

Write a movie review:


A. Study how to write a movie review.
C.  Watch a war movie.
D. Write your review in no more than two pages.
E. Be ready to share after the break. 

Happy viewing!






Tuesday, March 7, 2017

March 7, 2017 - Tuesday

Class work 

1.  "Mending Wall" by Robert Frost


Image result for new england rock walls

Image result for new england rock walls

2. News! We will peer edit the wall news stories!

Wall News – Peer editing!

Author: ______________________________  Editor: ___________________________
Wall: _______________________________________
Directions: Read the news article and answer the following questions.
1.       Who built the wall? Who needed the wall?

2.       Why was the wall built?


3.       Of what was it made? Why?


4.       How was it built? How long did it take? How long did the wall stand? How successful was the wall? In other words, did it do what it was supposed to do?



5.       When was it built? Was the wall related to war? If so, which war(s)?


6.       Is there anything else you would like to know about the wall?


Editor #2: ___________________________________ Check the spelling, punctuation, and sentence structure.
 List the best sentence and explain why you gave that award!

List one sentence that could be improved with revision. Make suggestions!

Homework



Revise your draft and post the revision. Include a Works Cited page in MLA format.




Revision: 75 points

Works Cited page: 25 points

Thursday, March 2, 2017

March 2, 2017 - Thursday

Class Work

1. Rocks and lists
This was the assignment:

  • Find a rock to bring to class - yes, a real rock List all of the possible uses for rocks - be creative! There will be a prize for the longest list. (paper copy)
  • List all of the walls you can think of - yes, there will be a prize for this list as well! (paper copy)
  • Bring the rock and both lists to class on Thursday. It's Thursday! Are you ready?
2. "Mending Wall" by Robert Frost


Image result for new england rock walls

Image result for new england rock walls

3. Homework Assignment

A. Select a wall of interest. (In-class brainstorm)  Investigate it by searching at least three sources. Wikipedia doesn't count!

B. Answer who, what, when, where, why, and how of the wall. These are the elements of a good news story. You are the reporter. You will need a good lead - first paragraph - to keep the readers' interest. Write your draft as if you were reporting the news of the wall. Slant your news. Show that the fence or wall was or is a success, or show that the fence or wall was or is a failure. 

C. How to: 




Post your draft by the beginning of class on Tuesday. 

Tuesday, February 28, 2017

February 28, 2017 - Tuesday

...on with the show!

1. You have 10 minutes to meet with your group and organize.
2. On the paper provided, list the title of your presentation followed by the names of all group members. Names must appear in the order of the presentation. Circle the names of those who are absent today. Put a star by the name of the person who posted on CANVAS.
3. When your group is called, go to the front of the room. You will be using the teacher computer to forward your slides. (Sorry - my remote mouse ran away!)
4. When you are a member of the audience, take notes.

Homework

1. Find a rock to bring to class - yes, a real rock!
2. List all of the possible uses for rocks - be creative! There will be a prize for the longest list. (paper copy)
3. List all of the walls you can think of - yes, there will be a prize for this list as well! (paper copy)

Bring the rock and both lists to class on Thursday.

Thursday, February 23, 2017

February 23, 2017 - Thursday

Class Work

1. Return to your group. If you were absent on Tuesday, see me for a group assignment. Also, review the directions from Tuesday's post.
2. Pull up your slide. You were to have one slide ready today. You will be reviewing the slide. (See Tuesday's check list.) On the paper copy of the check list, list your name as the editor. List the creator's name as the author.
3. Talk about the slides. Have you coordinated as a group? Will this look like a unified presentation once finished? If not, decide on fonts. colors, and punctuation for bullet points. Also make sure that all information leads to the point you are trying to share.
4. Outline what you will be saying in addition to the information on your assigned slide. You may write that information in the notes section on PowerPoint, or you may make note cards. Either way, I need to be able to see your information.
5. Spend the rest of the class time working on the final product and looking up additional information as needed. Your group needs one Works Cited slide. URLs are fine on this one.

The presentations will be given on Tuesday.

Tips for presentations: 


or



Let's make a list of what to do! (Group discussion)

Homework

Practice, practice, practice! Make sure that you will not be featured in an upcoming "Worst Presentation Ever" video!

Make sure your group presentation is posted in CANVAS. If you are the "coordinator",  post the entire project. All others, make sure your name appears on the first slide of the presentation. List names in the order of presentation. For example, the person who describes the audience is listed first. 





Tuesday, February 21, 2017

February 21, 2017 - Tuesday

Class Work

1. Review the two types of organization for comparison/contrast
 Patterns of Organization
Point -by-point
Item by item




https://www.sbcc.edu/clrc/files/wl/downloads/WritingaCompareContrastEssay.pdf

Which did you use for the quick-write about school you did for homework?


2. Let's talk about audience, tone, and purpose:




3. You will be working with a group of three or four. Select one of the following pairs to compare and contrast

A. Two pets
B. Two vehicles, makes, or models
C. Two vacations
D. Two theme parks
E. Two modes of transportation
F. Two places to eat
G. Two .... (your choice)

Once your group has made a selection, write that selection, along with your names,  on the board. If your choice is already taken, make another choice.

Group Assignment: PowerPoint
1. Define your audience. Show us who needs to know. Tell us why they need to know? (Pictures make powerful messages. (Three slides)
2. Determine your pattern of organization . . . (9 slides to compare and contrast)
Create a graphic organizer - Show me what you plan to do before you put the show together! 
3. In the PowerPoint, clearly show which is best! 
4. Your word choice and tone will be determined by your audience. 

Some tips about PowerPoint:


 What NOT to do!




  • Layout
    ·         Photographs, graphic design, and clipart are useful and enhance the presentation ________
    ·         Title, author, and course identification are on the first slide _______
    ·         Works Cited page is the last frame and is in MLA format______
    Fonts
    ·         Font size is at least 16 (Can you read it easily? _____ Suggestions: ______________________________________________________)
    ·         Footless Font is used _____
    ·         Color is of a deep enough contrast to be easily read _____
    ·         Font colors are limited to three or four throughout the presentation (Name them: 1.       2.      3.      4.
    Text
    ·         Bulleted points are limited to no more than six per slide ______
    ·         Six or fewer words per bullet are used _____
    ·         Headlines are effective _____
    ·         Spelling is correct _____
    ·         Punctuation is correct _____
    ·         End punctuation or no end punctuation is consistent when using bullets _____
    ·         Upper and lower case is used correctly _____
    ·         Animation is limited and necessary _____
    ·         Sound is limited and effective _____
    Content
    ·      
    ·          Point/thesis/claim is clear  _____
    ·         Supporting elements are evident _____
    ·         Introduction captures the attention of the audience _____
    ·         Conclusion contains a strong message _____
    ·         Clear steps for a “call to action” are obvious _____ 
We will present next Tuesday. Today, identify your audience and the organization you plan to use.  Assign segments. Assign ONE person to coordinate the presentation. (Google Docs works for this sort of assignment. Or, a simple e-mail attachment works, too. ) You will have 30 minutes in class to polish your presentation. The rest of the time will be devoted to the presentations. 

Suggestions: (Other options will also work. )
Assign one person create the audience slides.
Assign one-two people to show item by item or point by point slides. 
Assign one person to provide the title slide, transitional slides between points or items, and the Works Cited page.   


Homework:

Look for information about your assigned segment. Keep track of your sources. Create at least one slide to share with your group on Thursday.