Wednesday, October 18, 2017

October 19, 2017

Class Work
Activity #1: Peer Editing of the introductory essay.
You will have three editors. Sign your name at the top of the rubric and attach it to your draft.
Editor #1 will read for content.
Editor #2 will read for clarity
Editor #3 will read for grammar, usage, and mechanics. (GUM)

Review the comments. Revise your draft. Post the final copy in CANVAS. It is due October 24, 2017 at 7:00 am. 


 Activity #2
. Enter the time machine and travel back to the late 19th Century and early 20th Century.
Things were different then.
A. Look at the art of the time. What are women doing? What are men doing?
http://www.nga.gov/content/ngaweb/features/slideshows/american-impressionists-of-the-late-1800s-and-early-1900s.html#slide_1
B. . A slice of life: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ugh7pRtzTAQ Again, what are the women doing? What about the men?

Activity #3 Read: "The Story of an Hour" by Kate Chopin   https://my.hrw.com/support/hos/hostpdf/host_text_219.pdf

A. Silently read the story. Then work with a partner and  create a mind map for Mrs. Mallard (Listen for the instructions.  Paper will be provided.)

B. Discussion to follow . . . What really killed Mrs. Mallard? Find lines in the story that prove your point.

C. Table Activity: The Name Game - How important are names in a story.? Find the meanings of the names of the characters from "The Story of an Hour."
To begin, look up information about mallard ducks. What do the ducks and Mr. and Mrs. Mallard have in common, if anything?

Find the meanings of these names on-line at a What to Name the Baby or Meanings of Names site.

Josephine
Richards
Brently
Louise
Class discussion to follow.
Activity #4
A.  What yellow things are in "The Yellow Wallpaper?"Take out your lists/highlighted pages and at your table discuss how the "yellow" changed in the story. Go through it page by page. Write comments for each page on the paper provided. Be sure you names appear at the top of the page.

B. How might the story have been different if the wall paper had been a different color?
  • Select a color for your table to consider. Each table must have a different color.
  • Research that color. (5 minute activity)
  • Compose a list of 10 changes you might expect if the wallpaper had been a different color.
  • Do this on the discussion A sheet.

Activity #5 - This activity will be done on Tuesday.

Now that you have read the short story, do you think the protagonist was suffering a mental breakdown, or was she the victim of something supernatural? What evidence exists to support your point of view? 

  • Take a look at this site. http://www.virtualsalt.com/gothic.htm
  • For homework - 
  • Look back at "The Yellow Wallpaper" and make a list of all of the gothic items presented in the story
  • OR
  • Make a list of actions and words that suggest that the protagonist was unstable and/or suffering from illness, 
Post your list in CANVAS. (25 points) Due Thursday, October 26, 2017 at 7:00 am.

 Activity #6: 
View the PBS movie of the short story of "The Yellow Wallpaper.".(We will begin in class.) Be the critic.

  • Rate each segment.
  • What do you like about it?
  • What is weak?
  • If you were the director, what would you change?
Finish viewing for homework.  Post your ratings, reactions, and changes in Canvas. Be sure to label the segments.
Movie in 8 parts: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL54A86EACAA247777 (Click each segment to move along.) (40 points)
Due: Tuesday, October 24, 2017 at 7:00 am.
More  Homework
 Conduct some investigative reporting on post-partum depression, depression in general, and the treatment of both types in the late 1800s and early 1900s.Consult at least two sources.
A.  Write a paragraph or two that summarizes the information you read. Include the URL for each site you visited. 
 AND
B.  Look up information about Charlotte Perkins Gilman, the author of "The Yellow Wallpaper." Make a list of 10 items or events  you found interesting about her life. For each, explain how it was or was not typical of the time, or explain what it might have had to do with Ms. Gilman writing "The Yellow Wallpaper." Consult three different sources. Keep track of your sources and include your Works Cited at the end of your list. MLA Style, please.  (See https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/01/ for guidelines. Feel free to use www.easybib.com ) Due Tuesday, October 24, 2017, at 7:00 am.
B. Research the life and times of Kate Chopin, the author of "Story of an Hour."  List ten events from her life that you found interesting, unique, or important. Do any relate to the story?  Explain. Again, consult at least three sources and include the sources in MLA format at the end of your list. Due Tuesday, October 24, 2017, at 7:00 am.

Monday, October 16, 2017

October 17, 2017 - Tuesday

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Welcome to English 102


You located the blog! Congratulations. Please visit often. 
  1. Class work is posted here.
  2. Homework is posted here.
  3. Links to readings are posted here.
  4. You can quickly  see when your assignments should be posted in CANVAS.
  5. Your first assignment is to post a picture of yourself in CANVAS. This is worth 25 points. Seeing your face with your name helps me to learn your name in a timely manner. A selfie is just fine!If you already have a picture of yourself on Canvas, you have earned the first 25 points already!
  6. Your second assignment is to read the syllabus and post at least three reaction statements in CANVAS.  Consider these questions: What do you find interesting? What was surprising? Was anything confusing? What else do you want to know? The syllabus is posted on the earlier blog post. It is also on CANVAS. Click the "syllabus" link.
  7. Before we move on with the third assignment, let's get to know the other students in the class by playing a Getting to Know You game. Listen for the instructions.
  8. *******
     Note: Please compose in Word and copy/paste into the Canvas space. Or, compose in Canvas directly. Other formats are not always readable on my end.
    8. Let's get ready to write!
  • Take your camera/phone or sketch pad with your and walk around the hall, building, or campus. (5 minutes) Find something that is representative of you.
  • Maybe you will see a plant with thorns.  Is life difficult? Do you fight the thorns? Can you thrive without much? Are you a survivor?
  • Whatever you find, make sure you can compare yourself to the picture you take.
  •   Do you have a favorite song? If so, why do you like the song? What does the song say about you? How is your life like the lyrics, or is it? Do you have memories associated with the song?
  • What is your motto? If you don't have a motto, take a look at a quotation site and find a quotation that represents something about you.
www.quotationspage.com/qotd.html

www.brainyquote.com

Now, introduce yourself in writing - 1-2 pages. This is a draft. Post it in Canvas by the beginning of class on Thursday. (25 points) It will be used for a peer editing activity at the beginning of class. Also, bring a paper copy or be ready to print one in class.
  • Include the picture or sketch of the item you photographed to represent you. 
  •  Use the information about the song as it relates to you. 
  • Explain your motto or favorite quotation.  Feel free to include additional information. This is just a place to start.
 Activity 9:  Make a list of things that are YELLOW or that are associated with the color YELLOW.
Work with a group - your table partners will due!
There will be a prize for the group with the longest list! 

Activity 10:  
Let's talk about YELLOW. Look back at the list at your table.

https://images.search.yahoo.com/search/images;_ylt=A0SO80FJIthSlCgAB6lXNyoA;_ylu=X3oDMTB0cGoxampuBHNlYwNzYwRjb2xvA2dxMQR2dGlkA1NXSU1DMV8x?_adv_prop=image&fr=yfp-t-901&va=yellow

Take a look at yellow possibilities.

Write "+" by the things on your list that are positive.
Note "-" by the things on your list that are negative
  Activity 11: Quick Write: Write about a memory that includes "yellow." Compose in Word and post in Canvas, or just compose in Canvas. You have 15 minutes.

(We will brainstorm first.) 
Activity 12: . What did wallpaper look like in the early 1900s? Is this type of wallpaper making  come-back?

Activity 13: All about YELLOW:  http://www.sensationalcolor.com/color-meaning/color-meaning-symbolism-psychology/all-about-the-color-yellow-4297#.V74NCqKLD0I (
  • You have 5 minutes to learn all that you can about the history, meaning, and symbolism of yellow. Participate in a class discussion. You must contribute at least one comment to earn 10 points!
Homework: You will be reading   "The Yellow Wallpaper"
 http://www.gradesaver.com/the-yellow-wallpaper/e-text/section1/ By Thursday,   read the story and make a list of all things that are yellow in the story. (If you decide to print a copy, you just need to highlight the yellow things.) Bring your list or highlighted story to class on Tuesday.(20 points)

Recap:
1. Post your picture so that it shows in CANVAS conversations. (10 points)
2. Read the syllabus and post your reactions. (CANVAS) (12 points)
3. Write the 1-2 page introductory draft. (CANVAS - 25 points)
4. Read "The Yellow Wallpaper"
 http://www.gradesaver.com/the-yellow-wallpaper/e-text/section1/
and highlight all references to the color and things that are yellow. Bring the annotated story or the list to class on Thursday. (20 points) 

Monday, October 9, 2017

Fall 2017

Welcome to English 102 - The Early Bird Edition

Here is the syllabus for our course. Class activities and assignments will be posted the day of class.

This is just to get you started.

ESTRELLA MOUNTAIN COMMUNITY COLLEGE – Fall 2017

First – Year Composition – 3 Credit Hours – English 102 T/TH 7:00-8:45 & 12:00-1:15
        Instructor: Mrs. Patricia Eaton
E-mail: patricia.eaton@estrllamountain.edu
Blog: www.102eatonenglish.blogspot.com
Required TextsNone – You are required to check the blog for links to readings, class work, and homework.
Note: The syllabus is subject to change. Daily updates will be provided.
Important: If you miss a class, be sure to contact me via CANVAS message after reading the blog. Feel free to ask questions and ask for help.

All work will be submitted on CANVAS. 
Course Description
(Prerequisite: English 101 with a grade of “C” or better.)

English 102 builds upon skills developed in English 101. This course will require students to analyze and respond to text-based writing. Students will examine essays, short stories, and poetry. Students will be responsible for writing a minimum of three short critical essays to develop skills in textual analysis, written expression, and proper documentation. One of these writing assignments will be counted as an essay exam. These essays should be approximately three to five pages in length, typed, double spaced throughout, and have one-inch margins on all sides. Place your name, the date, and the course title in the upper left hand corner of the first page. Follow MLA formatting and guidelines for documentation.

In addition, students will be introduced to research strategies, note-taking, organization, and documentation in order to write well-developed and properly documented research papers. In completing research papers, students will demonstrate the ability to read difficult material with comprehension; to process information through quotation, summary, and paraphrase, and to integrate the ideas of others into their own sustained written examination of a subject.

The length of the research paper should be between 1,500-2,500 words.
In addition, numerous shorter writings will be completed.
Course Competencies
1. Develop skills in selecting, researching, analyzing, synthesizing, and documenting a 1,500-2,500 word research paper.
2. Compile a preliminary bibliography of potential research resources.
3. Use a variety of print and on-line library resources, including electronic databases, to locate information on the selected topic.
4. Use effective strategies for taking and organizing notes.
5. Analyze, interpret, and evaluate information found in research sources.
6. Paraphrase in language that is distinctly the student’s and quote source information accurately in order to avoid plagiarism.
7. Summarize a passage to reflect the central idea, most significant supporting details, or, and emphasis of the original work.
8. Compose an outline with an effective pattern of organization for the paper.
9. Compose a focused and clearly stated thesis for the paper.
10. Integrate cited information in summary, paraphrase, and quotations to support the thesis
11. Document information from research sources using MLA or APA documentation formatting.
12. Revise the draft of the paper, incorporating feedback received during editing, to produce a finished research paper that observes Standard English usage and manuscript form.
13. Explain and practice the principles of academic integrity throughout the research, writing, and revision process.
14. Write a minimum of three additional papers which involve critical reading and writing.
15. Write at least one argumentation paper which demonstrates sound, logical development.
16. Expose students to various forms of literary expression.

Abilities: Critical thinking and effective communication have been identified as essential to student success and will be integrated into this course. Critical thinking is defined as the ability to identify a problem, develop and implement strategies, evaluate information, reach conclusion, and respond to a problem. Effective communication is defined as the ability to respond to an audience, demonstrate clear sense of purpose, organize information, and deliver information using appropriate language.
Submission of Assignments: You must submit your assignments on CANVAS. Paper copies, unless specifically requested, will NOT be accepted or graded.
Attendance Policy: Active participation is expected for successful completion in this course. In the event of an absence, students are expected to contact me by e-mail (patriciaeatonaz@yahoo.com) or to visit the class blog at www.eatonenglish102.blogspot.com
Students are expected to complete any homework for the missed day by the next class period. If a student misses more than three classes, Maricopa Community College District policy states, “An instructor has the option of withdrawing a student who has accumulated unofficial absences in excess of the times a class meets per week (Withdrawal Policy #3).” See the college catalog for a full description of the college’s attendance policy including official absences and religious holidays.
Official Absences
  1. Official absences are those that occur when students are involved in an official activity of the college, i.e., field trips, tournaments, athletic events, and present an official absence excuse form. Absences for such events shall not count against the number of absences allowed by an instructor or department. Students who must miss a class for an official reason must obtain an official absence verification card from the appropriate vice president or designee and present it to the appropriate instructor(s) before the absence. Prior arrangements must be made with each instructor for make-up work. If prior arrangements have been made, the student will not be penalized.
  2. Other official absences include jury duty and subpoenas. Appropriate documentation will be required. Prior arrangements must be made with each instructor for makeup work. If prior arrangements have been made, the student will not be penalized.
  3. In the event of military commitments. Absences for periods of up to one week will not be counted against the number of absences allowed by an instructor or department. The student is required to provide appropriate documentation of the specific orders, length of assignment and location. Prior notification must be initiated with each instructor to discuss make-up work. If the length of the absence will be longer than one week, the instructor and the student will determine whether there is sufficient opportunity for the student to make up the work. If it is determined that the length of absence for the military commitment provides an undue hardship on the student’s ability to make up the assignments, he or she will be provided an opportunity to request an incomplete grade or drop the class or, in the case of open-entry classes, the opportunity to request an extension.
  4. In the event of the death of an immediate family member, absences for periods of up to one week will not be counted against the number of absences allowed by an instructor or department. Students should contact instructor(s) as soon as possible to arrange for make-up work. Appropriate documentation will be required (for example, a copy of the obituary or funeral program). In specialized programs that require clinical rotations, this regulation may not apply.
Religious HolidaysStudents shall have the right to observe major religious holidays without penalty or reprisal by any administrator, faculty member or employee of the Maricopa Community Colleges. Absences for such holidays shall not count against the number of absences allowed by an instructor or department. At least one week before the holiday, students shall submit to their instructor(s) a written statement that includes both the date of the holiday and the reason why class attendance is impossible. Prior arrangements must be made with each instructor for make-up work. If prior arrangements have been made, the student will not be penalized.
LateWork: Make-ups of in-class writing assignments are at the instructor’s discretion. Students turning their work in after the due date may be penalized by having the grade lowered five points per day in fairness to those students who met the deadline.

Tape Recordings and/or Video Recordings: In order to tape or transmit any class session or portion, a student must first seek permission from the instructor. In some instances, permission from the members of the class will also be required every time you plan to record. This includes FaceTime or other uses of technology that involve transmitting the class activities.

Cell PhonesCell phones must be turned off or placed on “vibrate” during class. At no time should a student be sending text messages, sending e-mails, listening to music, or carrying on conversations. In the event of an emergency call, please excuse yourself from the room, take care of the situation, and quietly return to class.
Student Disabilities: If you have a disability that requires special accommodations, please let me know as soon as possible. You are entitled to the accommodations. “Students with disabilities are encouraged to contact the DRS office at the beginning of the admissions process to discuss accommodation needs and to request an alternate format of printed materials. Some accommodation may require three to four weeks notification. For more information, call 623-935-8935.

Grading Scale: Short essays are 100 points each. There will be several short essays and three fully developed essays. Longer essays count double. In order to earn full credit, drafts and revisions must be submitted with the final copy. Peer editing sheets are also required.
Research notes, drafts, revision, MLA works cited page, and MLA in-text citations are required.

Class participation is 100 points.
A= 90-100%
B=80-89%
C=70-79%
D=60-69%
F=0-59%

Plagiarism: Plagiarism is the process of borrowing information from other sources or individuals without giving credit. Plagiarism will not be tolerated. Essays will not be accepted unless accompanied by pre-writing, notes, drafts, peer and self” editing marks, etc. This paper trail is proof of a student’s own work. Proof of plagiarism will result in a zero for the assignment.

Classroom Misconduct: Students must read the “Code of Student Conduct” in the new Student Handbook for an understanding of what will be expected within the academic setting.

Additional Information
Writing assistance is available at the EMCC Academic Success Center on the EMCC main campus.
Writing 623-935-8189 
Drop-in Hours: Mon-Thur – 7:30 am-7:00 pm & Friday 7:30 am-4:30 pm

Final Thoughts: This course is designed to help you become a better writer, researcher, and reader. You will get out of the course what you put into it. You are expected to actively participate in readings, discussions, debates, and reports. Come to class prepared with readings and with required writings and notes. Conduct thorough research. At all times, give credit to the source of information by using proper documentation. Be on time. Be positive. Ask questions. Contribute your thoughts. Be tolerant of others and of ideas that differ from your own.

Monday, May 15, 2017

Final Grades

Final grades have been submitted. Thanks for a delightful semester. Enjoy your summer!

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Tuesday, May 9, 2017

Exam - May 9, 2017

Our exam begins at 1:00 today. Come to our regular classroom. 

Bring a paper copy of your memoir. You will submit it after you share with the class in a writer's circle format.

Sharing guidelines:

1. Be prepared to read your memoir to the class. If it is longer than two pages, summarize the events up to the most exciting point in your story. Be sure the listeners understand the lesson learned. Don't cut too much!
2. When it is your turn, begin without apologies. Speak up! Remember that you are the star of this story.
3. Once finished, submit the paper copy of the memoir to me.
4. Once everybody has read, submit your electronic version in CANVAS.

Enjoy your summer and your future.

Reminder: You MUST come to the exam in order to pass the class - college rules!

This is the scoring rubric:


Name: _________________________                                  Scale:
4:  The reader is easily able to understand and/or appreciate
3:  The reader is generally able to understand and/or appreciate
2:  The reader is often challenged to understand and/or appreciate
1:  The reader is seriously challenged to understand and/or appreciate   


Scale
Points
Comments
Content



Subject Matter Issues:
The subject matter of the document should be appropriate for the assignment, adequate to complete the assignment, and suitable for the level of the assignment.
4
3
2
1
N.A.


Focus Issues:
The focus (or main idea or thesis) should be apparent to the reader, presented so as to interest the reader, and targeted to achieve the purpose of the assignment.

4
3
2
1
N.A


Support Issues:
The support should be appropriate to sustain the document’s focus, carefully chosen to meet the needs of the assignment, and of sufficient quantity to carry out the development of the document.
4
3
2
1
N.A


Clarity



Organization Issues:
The document should be developed in a way that shows how all material relates to the focus, shows how all development relates to other parts of the document, and provides adequate transitions to guide the reader and illustrate these relationships.
4
3
2
1
N.A


Language Use Issues:
The language of the document should aid the reader’s comprehension and appreciation by using organized paragraphing, clear and correct sentences, and appropriate word choice.
4
3
2
1
N.A


Editing



Format Issues:
The format of the document should aid comprehension by being clear, consistent, and appropriate for the assignment.
4
3
2
1
N.A


Citation Issues:
The citation in the document should be complete, correct, and appropriate for the assignment.
4
3
2
1
N.A


Mechanics Issues:
The document should be comprehensively edited to ensure that the spelling is correct, that punctuation is properly used, and that grammar is correct.
4
3
2
1
N.A



List for sharing:
Did the author:
___ write about himself or herself? 
___ Provide a clear setting of time and place?
___ tell a story?
___ provide dialogue?
___ have a point or message or lesson learned? This is a key point in memoir writing. What was it? 
___ have a great ending? 


Comments:




Sharing grade: _______________    Paper Grade: _______________   Overall Exam Grade: __________________

Thursday, May 4, 2017

Thursday, May 4, 2017

Class Work

First, the war essays will be returned. READ my remarks and follow the instructions. Let me know if you have questions.

Today we will be peer editing the memoir drafts. CANVAS has assigned you two essays to edit.

Reminders about memoirs:

“Unlike autobiography, which moves in a dutiful line from birth to fame, memoir narrows the lens, focusing on a time in the writer’s life that was unusually vivid, such as childhood or adolescence, or that was framed by war or travel or public service or some other special circumstance” —p. 15 of Inventing the Truth: The Art and Craft of Memoir by William Zinsser (Mariner Books, 1998)



http://www.dummies.com/education/language-arts/getting-published/memoir-writing-for-dummies-cheat-sheet/

See below:

  • A sympathetic main character: A reader’s sympathy and interest doesn’t come for free. You have to earn it. Make this a priority for your main character to come across as sympathetic, and readers will appreciate it.
  • Vividly depicted scenes: A vividly depicted scene has strong imagery that creates a movie in the mind of readers. Strong scenes like these are memorable and lasting.
  • Emotional tension: An emotionally involved reader will keep reading. Find a way to create and heighten the emotional impact of your story. Every story has emotional tension. Make sure you have the distance or outside guidance to find it and fully explore it.
  • Increasing sense of drama/conflict: A story that builds increasingly toward the climax comes across as purposeful. How do you build? Ratchet up the conflict. Show how the stakes are raised. Make readers know what might be lost.
  • A satisfying ending: Note that this is a satisfying ending versus a good or bad ending. No matter how the main story of your memoir ends, it should wrap up the main story tensions and bring a sense of closure.

As you read each memoir, check the following:

Did the author:

___ write about him or her self? 
___ Provide a clear setting of time and place?
___ tell a story?
___ provide dialogue?
___ have a point or message or lesson learned? This is a key point in memoir writing. What was it? 
___ have a great ending? 

What was the most interesting part of the story? 

What suggestions for revision do you offer? 

Also check for proper grammar/usage/and mechanics. 

You should be able to respond to these points on the essay in the editing mode. 

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Exam notes: 

Once your memoir has be edited by two readers, you are ready to revise, print, and bring a paper copy to the exam. You will also be required to submit an electronic version on CANVAS during the exam time. Also plan on reading part of your memoir to the class in a readers' circle format. (Two minute limit.)

EMCC guidelines require your physical presence on the day of the exam in order to pass the class.  Plan accordingly. If you car dies, call a friend or call a taxi.

If you are ill, you will need to have a medical note and make arrangements to meet with me. 

If there is a family emergency, contact me. DO NOT miss the exam!

Tuesday, May 2, 2017

No Class Today - Tuesday, May 2, 2017

We will not be meeting today. I am under the weather and do not wish to share the wicked germs with you.  Continue to work on your memoir. I will change the due date to Thursday, May 4.